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Ryder Revenge: The Prophet (Last cartoon)... in progress

Father Janer @Djjaner

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Posted by Djjaner - May 28th, 2015


http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/3ab6a5b59a0507b58ec68f32357c97f5

Please rate 0-10.. thanks.. :D


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You may want to improve the fire of the minigun, maybe like this: a big firetongue in the middle following the line of fire and two small ones tilted forward from both upper and lower side... and a bit of of orange/yellow on it should fit ;)

It's very weird to see you try A new style ! But It look very great ! Just need a lil bit of smooth !
Wish you the best of luck !

7 out of 10

7.5/10

It's kind of strange you try to make another style but ok.
I'm not going to rate it but I will say something you should try to improve: Acceleration.
Your animating style is very good and you can make very much frames in minutes! Something that is not normal between the animators, but I think you should try to slow down a bit when the character is going to make a movement.

I'm gonna be honest, i prefer a lot your old style than this one.

i would have to say 8 out of 10 . im not sure . can you provide a clip of someone getting killed ?

9.5/10
That's cool

8.5/10

i don't know.. i <3 your old style!

Robotic walk :/

5/10