Djjaner 2015-03-13 17:54:17

Overall using a tween for every thing, it makes a lot of animators but it is not science.
People like to watch violence and action than fast shooting scene, try to put more work into more complex killing and to use more than 3 shots to kill a guy.

That guy comes over two seconds and kills more than 5 people is wrong. Try to be original.

As for the other tests if they are old for me are worthless.

Try it, and then you will be more than perfect. Keep it up.

Djjaner 2015-03-13 21:26:59

Overall, it's more than good, I like your style of animation, maybe next time you send me a test where something happens otherwise it well watching. Keep it up.

Djjaner 2015-03-14 02:49:26

1. test:
+ Fall figure was smooth
+ The movement of the characters is good and well monitored.
+ The shot is fine

- More to train movement of the legs, but otherwise interesting.

2. test:
+ Everything is more than well done.

- Try a faster swing the sword for a better effect.

Overall:
Well watch it, it's smooth and seamless and I like it, you are just small flaws but it can be easily remedied, keep it up.

Djjaner 2015-03-14 04:09:33 (Updated 2015-03-14 04:27:53)

Your test was very short to criticized. Otherwise, it looks very good, keep it up.

I saw a lot of your animation and watch it well, but I would like to see a longer test. ;)

Djjaner 2015-03-14 10:41:55

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Djjaner 2015-03-14 11:29:45

Slow should you try to walking and shooting acceleration should be fast. Try to improve your shooting and walking, and then it will be good. keep it up.

Djjaner 2015-03-14 12:32:22

More than good. Walking is very interesting (swinging) maybe even unnecessary but well watching it. I like fast attack and the swing is more than perfect. You not much remains to excellence. Keep it up. :)

Djjaner 2015-03-14 12:35:16

It's smooth and fast and it's more than good, this style of animation you would have had to animate more.

Djjaner 2015-03-14 18:56:25

You have a really interesting style of walking maybe too exaggerated bouncing. See the example in Cethic, his style of walking is fast and smooth well watching it. Try more practice walking your shooting is good I like it. Keep it up.